gather unscreened thoughts thrash the thorns from the blossoms search the chaff for truth
WordPress Writing 201: Assignment One. Prompt: screen. Form: haiku. Device: alliteration.
gather unscreened thoughts thrash the thorns from the blossoms search the chaff for truth
WordPress Writing 201: Assignment One. Prompt: screen. Form: haiku. Device: alliteration.
Search the chaff for truth – great line!
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Thank you. And thanks for commenting.
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I really like this 🙂
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Thank you.
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You are welcome 🙂
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You got me searching in the dictionnary for “chaff”, i didn´t know that one…:-) also, I read a great haiku in my wp reader today and was rather surprised to find out it wasn´t yours! (That should be a compliment.)
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Wow! That is quite the compliment! Thank you. When I was writing this one, my brain kept telling me the word I wanted was “shaft,” which I knew wasn’t right. I finally had to look up the phrase to remember the correct word “chaff.”. Very glad I did!
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I enjoyed that — made me pause and ponder.
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.
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