I was a kept woman:
kept from wanting, kept from having;
kept at home, kept at arm’s length;
kept alive, kept from living.
I kept my head down,
kept my opinions to myself.
I couldn’t keep up.
I gave up.
Now,
I’m a giver.
I was a kept woman:
kept from wanting, kept from having;
kept at home, kept at arm’s length;
kept alive, kept from living.
I kept my head down,
kept my opinions to myself.
I couldn’t keep up.
I gave up.
Now,
I’m a giver.
Brilliant 🌺
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Thank you.
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Now this is a different perspective on the prompt word! Love it, Maggie! Never let anyone or anything keep you from having a life. Giving is a good start. The repetition of ‘kept’ is very effective, especially in ‘kept alive, kept from living’.
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Thank you, Kim. And the life I have now is wonderful.
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I like the transition to being a giver.
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Thank you, Frank.
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Gotta always rise above Maggie…
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Absolutely.
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This is brilliant… and being a giver, means breaking the bars of what kept you in place.
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Yes, giving represents freedom. Thanks, Bjorn.
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This is heart-wrenching and penned with incredible sensitivity! ❤️
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Thank you. Fortunately a memory, not a current event. 🙂
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