De-Composing

NaPoWriMo Challenge, Day 19 (still catching up): An erasure poem as described by poet Dan Brady.

“First, write a paragraph of prose about anything you want. Next scan through the text and try to erase it down to a single sentence or phrase. The erased text becomes your first page and the full prose paragraph becomes your last page. Now see if you can add bit by bit to create a sequence that builds across several pages/iterations between the initial phrase to the complete text.”

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    • Thanks. I don’t think I did it “right,” as the directions I tried to follow said that one iteration should build upon the other to advance the story. But I had fun doing it this way. 🙂

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  1. I really enjoyed your erasure poems. I didn’t know there was a type of erasure poem where you repeated the process.

    I think my favorite phrases were “after a bee / held me responsible for / the birds” and “I need to have a / serious talk with / the bees” but I love bees so I might be biased.

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