
Day Nine of National Poetry Writing Month! Today’s prompt from NaPoWriMo.net:
We’re calling today Sonnet Sunday, as we’re challenging you to write in what is probably the most robust poetic form in English. A traditional sonnet is 14 lines long, with each line having ten syllables that are in iambic pentameter (where an unstressed syllable is followed by a stressed syllable). While love is a very common theme in sonnets, they’re also known for having a kind of argumentative logic, in which a problem is posed in the first eight lines or so, discussed or argued about in the next four, and then resolved in the last two lines. A very traditional sonnet will rhyme, though there are a variety of different rhyme schemes.
My attempt:
For the Love of Springtime in Colorado
Boots sinking deep in mud-browned melting snow, sweatshirt peeled off and knotted at my waist. Spring’s dichotomy in Colorado. Wool socks, sun shades; my rucksack packed in haste. Crabapples bloom, spent petals drifting down. Snow lingers where protected by thick shade. As winter seeps into the thawing ground, summer will drop like curtains on a stage. I trek on, heedless of sign and season. Despite spring breeze or autumnal bluster, ubiquitous blue skies transcend reason. I suck the thinning air, my strength mustered. Toes white with cold, face tanned by sun, I smile. Springtime in the Rockies keeps one agile.
And click here for a throwback to a previous sonnet I wrote.
What a beautiful theme for a love sonnet. To smiling tanned faces.
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I’m going there next week to visit! Can’t wait!
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