Ship Shapes


To fit ships inside bottles is indeed very clever,
but I would prefer that my bottles held rum.

To ship boats in boxes – though no lofty endeavor –
while sipping on rum could be fittingly fun.


Drunk lips drink ships; bottled boats don’t float.

dVerse Quadrille #62 — Boxes

About Maggie C

Stained glass artist, writer, respecter of life.
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12 Responses to Ship Shapes

  1. Peggy Lemmer says:

    I have built a few model boats and can say for certain that rum does not aid in this endeavor. I could never get them inside any bottle and preferred to drink rum. 🙂

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  2. whimsygizmo says:

    So very clever! 🙂
    In the words of Captain Jack Sparrow: Why is the rum always gone? 😉

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  3. jazzytower says:

    Love the rhyme in this, it’s so much fun😊


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