threading through the clouds
jets rip the sky asunder
contrails hide the tears
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I had to stop and ponder tear as in cry or tear as in ripped. Either way, I think your title works.
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If you stopped to ponder, then you got the point exactly! 🙂
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The idiom is “sowing discord”, not “sewing discord”. Of course that leaves room for a pun, and jets ripping the sky asunder is much akin to plowing a furrow in which to sow seeds. Or discord.
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“Sewing discord” is a pun and leaves room for additional puns about threading clouds, and ripping the sky asunder much akin to ripping out seams as is sometimes necessary in sewing a garment. Or perhaps the whole intent of the poem was to sow discord amongst its readers. 😉
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Fun peace Maggie… wonderful provocation of thought!! (misspelling intended)
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Haha! As a former school teacher, I would assume any misspelling on your part would be intentional (and “punny”).
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