sewing discord

contrail in clouds

threading through the clouds
jets rip the sky asunder
contrails hide the tears

About Maggie C

Stained glass artist, writer, respecter of life.
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6 Responses to sewing discord

  1. JANE says:

    I had to stop and ponder tear as in cry or tear as in ripped. Either way, I think your title works.

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  2. Nik says:

    The idiom is “sowing discord”, not “sewing discord”. Of course that leaves room for a pun, and jets ripping the sky asunder is much akin to plowing a furrow in which to sow seeds. Or discord.

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    • Maggie C says:

      “Sewing discord” is a pun and leaves room for additional puns about threading clouds, and ripping the sky asunder much akin to ripping out seams as is sometimes necessary in sewing a garment. Or perhaps the whole intent of the poem was to sow discord amongst its readers. 😉

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  3. JANE says:

    Fun peace Maggie… wonderful provocation of thought!! (misspelling intended)

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