Day Nine of NaPoWriMo. *
Today’s prompt:
” write a “concrete” poem – a poem in which the lines and words are organized to take a shape that reflects in some way the theme of the poem. “
As my bathroom remodel drags on, I have spent some sleepless nights worrying about things like p traps and wax ring seals and waterproof caulk. So today’s poem is a reflection of that. Herewith,
Plumb Tired

I couldn’t sleep a wink last night
as I lay in my bed.
The drip, drip, drip of piped in thoughts
were swirling through my head.
My bathroom is a shambles
since I tried to fix some leaks.
What started out a simple task
has now turned into weeks.
The toilet out, a new floor laid,
the sink restored to white.
I’m flushed with pride, the leaks subside.
Perhaps tonight I’ll sleep.
*National Poetry Writing Month, Day Nine
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Stained glass artist, writer, respecter of life.
Wow! The structure is amazingly well done…like the drip, drip of water flowing.
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Thank you.
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Hahahaha! I particularly like “flushed with pride.”
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Thanks!
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