Take Two

Here’s another take on Days Five and Six of the NaPoWriMo challenge, combined. Same photo, different poem, different experiment with line breaks. 

Mt Hood 

feel this day
with the soft touch of your gentle eyes
inhale this view; safeguard the scent in your heart
listen to the sunlight; taste its warmth on the mountaintop
tuck this day into the brightest recesses of your outermost soul
and share it as often and as loud and far and bright as you possibly can
for not everyone has the means nor  place  nor time nor the luxury nor sentience
to feel days like this


About Maggie C

Stained glass artist, writer, respecter of life.
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3 Responses to Take Two

  1. Peggy Lemmer says:

    Beautiful! I think I could actually smell that beautiful day. 🙂

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  2. Pingback: NaPoWriMo / GloPoWriMo 2018 – Day 7 – “Eyes That Tell All” by David Ellis | toofulltowrite (I've started so I'll finish)

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